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... F E E D B A C K M A C H I N E..
BY JEFFREY L. JONES.. FEEDBA
CK MACHINE DOUBLES AS OUR.CRITIQUE AND C
OMMENT PROGRAM, TAKING.THE PLACE OF DISK
WRITER AND LOADSTAR.CRITIQUE. THOSE WHO
HAVE COMPLAINED."CENSORSHIP!" DUE TO TH
E RESTRICTED.EDITING FEATURES AND TEXT S
PACE OF.DISKWRITER WILL FIND THIS VERSIO
N A.LESS RESTRICTIVE. THIS VERSION IS.M
ORE OF A WORD PROCESSOR THAN BEFORE,.ALL
OWING YOU TO VENT YOUR SPLEEN,.POUR OUT
YOUR HEART, OR EMPTY YOUR.STOMACH AS MUC
H AS YOU LIKE..... YOU HAVE APPROXIMA
TELY 25,000.BYTES FREE TO RESPOND TO THE
.QUESTIONS AND YOU CAN MOVE UP AND.DOWN
USING THE CURSOR KEYS TO CHANGE.YOUR RES
PONSES... THE FIRST QUESTION IS ASKED
.AUTOMATICALLY. WHEN YOU'VE FINISHED.AN
SWERING THE QUESTION, PRESS F1 AND.THE N
EXT QUESTION WILL BE ASKED... TO USE
THIS PROGRAM AS A LETTER.WRITER TO LOADS
TAR, JUST DON'T PRESS.F1. IT'S THAT SIM
PLE... TO CHECK FREE MEMORY, PRESS F5
.. TO INSERT A LINE, PRESS CTRL-I..
TO DELETE A LINE PRESS CTRL-D... F
EEL FREE TO TELL ME HOW THIS NEW,.IMPROV
ED VERSION CAN BE MADE BETTER... AS B
EFORE, YOU CAN SEND YOUR.CRITIQUE COMMEN
TS ON DISK OR ON.PAPER. SINCE WE'RE USE
D TO LOOKING.FOR FILES CALLED "COMMENTS"
, YOU CAN.HELP US OUT BY CALLING YOUR FI
LE BY.THAT NAME... ON EVERY ISSUE OF
LOADSTAR WE.PUBLISH CRITIQUES AND QUESTI
ONS FROM.OUR READERS. THIS IS A GOOD WA
Y TO.GET YOUR NAME MENTIONED FROM COAST
TO.COAST, SO SEND US YOUR COMMENTS...
**** END OF TEXT ****.
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