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... C R I T I Q U E I I..
BY JEFFREY L. JONES.. OUR "BELOVED
" CRITIQUE ENGINE.NOW DOUBLES AS OUR DIS
KWRITER PROGRAM..THOSE WHO HAVE COMPLAIN
ED CENSORSHIP.DUE TO RESTRICTED EDITING
AND SPACE.WILL FIND THIS VERSION OF DISK
WRITER.A LESS RESTRICTIVE. THIS VERSION
IS.MORE OF A WORD PROCESSOR THAN BEFORE
,.ALLOWING YOU TO VENT FRUSTRATIONS.AND
OFFER KUDOS AS MUCH AS YOU LIKE..I SPENT
ALL OF TWO WEEKS GETTING THIS.THING TOG
ETHER SO PLEASE BE GENTLE IF.YOU FIND AN
Y BUGS..... YOU HAVE APPROXIMATELY 24
,000.BYTES FREE TO RESPOND TO THE.QUESTI
ONS AND YOU CAN MOVE UP AND.DOWN USING T
HE CURSOR KEYS TO CHANGE.YOUR RESPONSES.
.. THE FIRST QUESTION IS ASKED.AUTOMA
TICALLY. WHEN YOU'VE FINISHED.ANSWERING
THE QUESTION, PRESS F1 AND.THE NEXT QUE
STION WILL BE ASKED... TO USE THIS PR
OGRAM AS A LETTER.WRITER TO LOADSTAR, JU
ST DON'T PRESS.F1. IT'S THAT SIMPLE...
TO CHECK FREE MEMORY, PRESS F5.. T
O INSERT A LINE, PRESS CTRL-I.. TO DE
LETE A LINE PRESS CTRL-D... FEEL FRE
E TO TELL ME HOW THIS NEW,.IMPROVED VERS
ION CAN BE MADE BETTER... AS BEFORE,
YOU CAN SEND YOUR.CRITIQUE COMMENTS ON D
ISK OR ON.PAPER. SINCE WE'RE USED TO LO
OKING.FOR FILES CALLED "COMMENTS", YOU C
AN.HELP US OUT BY CALLING YOUR COMMENTS.
THAT...DISK FILES THIS PROGRAM USES..DIS
KWRITER FEATURES.ROUTINES
T.DISKWRITER.. **** END OF TE
XT ****.
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