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00000560: 20 2A 2A 2A 2A 0D | ****. |
... L O A D S T A R C R I T I Q U E.
. BY THE LOADSTAR GENERAL STAFF..
AFTER LOOKING AT SEVERAL HUNDRED.SURVEYS
AND CRITIQUES ONE QUESTION.KEPT RUNNING
THROUGH MY MIND. "ARE.WE ASKING THE RI
GHT QUESTIONS?" I.NOTICED THAT IT WAS E
ASIER TO GLEAN.SOMETHING PERTINENT FROM
ANSWERS THAT.WERE WORDED THAN FROM ANSWE
RS THAT.JUST HAD A NUMBER FROM 1 TO 10..
. SO THIS MONTH THE LOADSTAR.CRITIQUE
HAS BEEN MODIFIED SO THAT.YOU CAN COMME
NT IN MORE DETAIL ABOUT.EACH PROGRAM. Y
OU MAY ENTER UP TO.THREE LINES WORTH OF
COMMENTS.... THE LAST QUESTION, "WHAT
.DIRECTION WOULD YOU LIKE TO SEE.LOADSTA
R TAKE IN THE FUTURE?" AFFORDS.YOU SIX L
INES TO VENT YOUR VALUED.OPINION. PLEAS
E LET US KNOW WHAT YOU.THINK... DO NO
T ENTER RETURN AT THE END OF.EACH LINE.
PRESS RETURN ONLY WHEN.YOUR COMMENT IS
FINISHED... AS BEFORE, YOU CAN SEND Y
OUR.CRITIQUE COMMENTS ON DISK OR ON.PAPE
R. CONTINUING OUR WAR ON THE."WASTE SYN
DROME" (AS DESCRIBED IN.THIS MONTH'S DIS
KOVERY), WE MADE THE.NEW CRITIQUE FIT ON
ONE SHEET OF.PAPER... IF THE NUMBER
OF LINES WE.RESTRICTED YOU TO FOR YOUR C
OMMENTS.IS NOT ENOUGH, FEEL FREE TO SCRI
BBLE.MORE COMMENTS ON THE PRINTOUT. I.I
MAGINE IT'LL BE ANOTHER COUPLE OF.YEARS
BEFORE I GET TIRED OF READING.YOUR COMME
NTS EVERY MONTH. OF COURSE.BY THEN SOFT
DISK, INC. WILL HAVE ITS.OWN TV NETWORK
AND HOLOGRAPHIC E-MAIL.SYSTEM...
**** END OF TEXT ****.
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