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... L O A D S T A R C R I T I Q U E.
. BY THE LOADSTAR GENERAL STAFF..
SO FAR THE RESPONSE TO LOADSTAR.CRITIQUE
HAS BEEN VERY GRATIFYING AND.INFORMATIV
E. EVERY MONDAY MORNING I.ASK RHONDA, O
UR LOVELY SECRETARY, FOR.THE CRITIQUES T
HAT CAME IN THE.PREVIOUS WEEK AND LEAN B
ACK IN MY.OVERSTUFFED PROGRAMMING CHAIR
(MADE.OF RICH CORINTHIAN LEATHER, OF.COU
RSE) AND ENJOY AN HOUR OR SO OF.PLEASANT
CRITICISM... THE REST OF THE WEEK GO
ES.DOWNHILL FROM THERE.... SOME READE
RS HAVE ASKED FOR MORE.THAN THREE LINES
OF COMMENTS FOR EACH.PROGRAM. OTHER REA
DERS WOULD LIKE A.WORD-WRAP CAPABILITY I
NSTALLED. AND.SOME NON-TYPING READERS W
OULD RATHER.WRITE IT THEMSELVES... MA
Y WE SUGGEST THAT YOU GO.THROUGH THE CRI
TIQUE SIMPLY PRESSING.RETURN AT EACH PRO
MPT. THEN PRINT.OUT YOUR CRITIQUE AND Y
OU CAN EASILY.WRITE IN ANY COMMENTS IN T
HE THREE.BLANK LINES BETWEEN EACH PROGRA
M.TITLE... WORD WRAP IS A FEATURE I'V
E.WRITTEN DOWN ON MY LIST OF THINGS TO.D
O -- A LARGE LIST, BY THE WAY.... WE'
VE GIVEN YOU THE OPTION OF.SENDING IN YO
UR CRITIQUE ON PAPER OR.ON DISK. WE DON
'T REALLY EXPECT MANY.CRITIQUES ON DISK
BUT IF YOU HAVE NO.PRINTER (OR HAVE ONE
THAT'S BIT THE.DUST) YOU CAN STILL SEND
US A DISK... WE LIKE GETTING MAIL, ES
PECIALLY.SPECIFIC LETTERS ABOUT PROGRAMS
. I.HOPE TO HEAR FROM YOU SOON...
**** END OF TEXT ****.
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